Today during literacy we worked in pairs to create a brochure promoting a new place to holiday. We structured our writing like a report, using the criteria we created last week. We had a cool picture that gave us ideas and created questions about the unique environment, outdoor activities and tourist attractions the planet may hold for a traveler. Today we mainly focused on creating interesting and attention grabbing introductions. Clem, Sophie, Austin, Samantha and Rupert were all acknowledged for their superb writing today. The thing we decided set their work apart was the use of technical and sci-fi language which made it believable and hooked us in. We will create a voice thread so you can listen to how awesome they are when they have been completed. Fantastic fun, a great effort every one.
3 comments:
Wow! What a cool blog you have room 22. Sounds like school is too much fun but great to see Miss Berry is keeping you all very busy. Good luck for tomorrows swimming sports.
Hey guys,
this was such a cool fun thing to do!,making out own planets was awesome.
l8erz
sorry i did a mistake in my coment it was surposed to be making our own planets.
sorry
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