Snapshot Writing

After the kids had zoomed in and zoomed out I gave them a brief framework for them to use.  

Here are some pieces of writing from today's lesson.

I saw the boats of people surrounding me like an invasion. I heard the whispers of people talking as though they are planning a tactical manoeuvre  .  I feel unsafe in this cave with only me to think fast .  I wonder if they are here to help me or if they are coming for me.   Cameron

I can see little blue boats on crystal clear water.  I hear water dripping down from the top of the rocky cave.   I feel the cold article water as I run my hands through the current.  I wonder if they notice me?  By Callen

Blue Boat

I see another boat, alone on the water.  I hear water dripping from the top of the cave.  I feel the damp airs breath flowing past my face.  I wonder if there is a way out. 

Eva

I see The watery cave, green plants growing.  I hear the water trickling off the rocky walls, as the winds sounds eco off the cave.  I feel the tropical water , cold as frozen ice and I wonder how I can leave this place.  Arie