The first part of the writing, and todays focus,was to write in first person and describe our vehicle.
Each child chose an image of an interesting vehicle then used a frame work to describe it in detail. Here are some wonderful examples ...
I had a new car, it was an exciting new toy. It was a Porche Xv1 2013. I had called her Thunderstorm, and she lived up to her name. This was my dream car, and now I finally had her. The body was metallic silver and gleamed in the sun, at night she shone like a star in the moonlight. Curved and streamlined she was able to reach speeds which were imagined only in your wildest dreams. Auriel
1 comment:
Auriel, what a super paragraph. Lovely flow and detail.
Mr Ray
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